The Elevator Ride

Her mother fell ill
And was close to death
So this is the tale
Of her final breath

A friend of mine
A long time ago
Told this story
You all must know

Her mother lay dying
In her hospital bed
When she opened her eyes
These words were said

There they stand
Can't you see
Two angel's in white
Smiling at me

There in the corner 
At the foot of my bed
Her daughter thought morphine
Was filling her head

Her daughter caught the elevator
And climbed aboard
A voice said stand at attention
For a saint of the Lord

She couldn't move
No matter how hard she tried
And when the elevator stopped
Her mother had died

Her mother was gone
But wasn't alone
For two angel's had taken her
Straight to God's Throne



(This is a true story)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 10:25 AM
Congratulations Larry on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Angels Among Us". Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
July 10, 2010 at 6:50 AM
Congrats Larry on your HM in the Angels Among Us contest with this ..yet another.. brilliant write.. enjoyed reading its dynamic quality.. enjoy your very special honor.. with luv..
Green Avatar
July 10, 2010 at 1:40 AM
Excellent Larry, love this and congrats!
Arteaga Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 9:31 PM
i'm glad to know that people do get help to cross over to the other side so they don't fear the new, great poem larry, congrats on your hm
Culverhouse Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 7:35 PM
I am a nurse and have witnessed some deaths like this...it seems the dying have angels to help them cross over.
Taylor Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 12:59 PM
Awesome. The fact that its true is a bit eerie. Great write, however. ..Ralph
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