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The Elements

Blue marble of life Never was in strife Enter humans greedy, scheming Leaving the Earth screaming Invisible saviour and protector Cries silently in horror Ravages by Father time Corrupting it from sublime The life giving elixir And ultimate thirst quencher Wasn’t spared human greed Hence, contamination was guaranteed Playing with raging fire Is the human desire To burn the house That’s hard to douse

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Date: 2/22/2024 4:46:00 AM
Brilliant rhymes and rhythm to your well articulated lines, I absolutely love the opening that is truly captivating and how the rest just flows seamlessly. “The life giving elixir And ultimate thirst quencher Wasn’t spared human greed Hence, contamination was guaranteed ” this stood out the most for me! Pleasure reading this! Congratulations on your win
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MB Farookh
Date: 2/22/2024 7:05:00 AM
Thank you so much, Empress for your appreciation and kind words. Your remarks have made my day. Thank you once again for visiting my space.
Date: 2/21/2024 11:30:00 AM
- Lovely described the four elements in rhyme, MB - Impressive :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) -
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MB Farookh
Date: 2/21/2024 1:22:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne. Much appreciated.
Date: 2/21/2024 4:58:00 AM
Congrats on your win MB, Very nicely penned
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MB Farookh
Date: 2/21/2024 6:55:00 AM
Thank you so much JM, much appreciated.
Date: 2/20/2024 9:35:00 PM
Very creative and unique take on the 4 elements. Congrats for your win
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MB Farookh
Date: 2/21/2024 6:57:00 AM
Thank you so much, AD. It means so much to me.

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