The Element of Water

Making efforts for self-realization,
start changing attitude by perspiration, a little HYDRATION,

INVIGORATE you to set right goal,
then you get pious way to the soul, a Northside pole,

PRECIPITATION of greed envy lust,
CRYSTALLIZATION of desires is must, fulfillment of thirst,

its the REQUISITE for success label,
senses become fully IMPERMEABLE, as waterfall bearable.




Date : 03/30/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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July 1, 2016 at 8:45 AM
I don't see much here...but good going...skat
A   Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 11:59 PM
Deepak, Congrats on your win. XOX ~LINDA~
A. Sharma Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 10:26 PM
Congrats on superb win with this exquisite write Deepak..
Scars Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 11:45 AM
Deepak, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
Davey Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 6:43 AM
Congratulations on your HM in my Water Element contest with a wonderful write on water! Thank you for entering
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