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The Electric Vortex

Laughing as eternals playmates
Hovering outside the vortex of time
Like youngsters contemplating a roller coaster
With only the thrill of getting in line
Carefree glances at each other
The lazy edge of this whirlpool
We joyfully allow the undertow
To sling us in full throttle

With screams of exhilaration
All things known now never were
And we corkscrew at light speed
Along the electric rope of this cylinder
Souls roaring with abundance
Knowing exactly who we are
Not one thought of limitations
Now to a new and random star

As we pull back the throttle
Feeling the density increase
Approaching a new big, blue world
And we prepare for reentry
I look into her beautiful eyes
As we descend both smiling
Ready to take another ride
To overcome fears of infinity

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/22/2011 7:54:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning David. Keep that pen flowing and keep sharing your excellent poetry with the world. Wishing you a wonderful weekend and may it bring you added inspiration as it sails along. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/21/2011 3:02:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work this eve..Sara
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