The Eight Heart

Do not be afraid
So walk in the name of love
I, with open arms
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 20, 2010 at 5:56 PM
Nicely done, nice form of senryu... the first two lines are cool
Devonshire Avatar
May 20, 2010 at 4:21 PM
Oh, I like this one a lot, Edward. Beautifully written senryu! Love, Carolyn
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May 20, 2010 at 2:23 PM
very beautiful senryu Eddie,its nice to find open arms,when one feel alone or rejected.Who doesn't need love?love heals pain,great senryu nice 8 title. .lucky number. .going to my fvs. .Charma
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May 20, 2010 at 12:24 PM
nice senryu
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