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The Edge of Midnite

-- A poetic glimpse into the metaphysical world of ' The twilight Zone ' The edge of midnite, not quite day or night, not quite death or life --- What realms do I wander your curtained halls? No mere mortal can shed the rust from your bones --- and solve thy mystery; a thing that should not be, nestled between life and dreams, so brief it whimpers in the dark and is gone.... Yet, you are there, and return, something faceless; no dance nor melody could live to breathe one breath; You will live a thousand years more ---- tell me ---- darkling lord: What shall bring your death?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/22/2016 7:54:00 AM
You do dark as well as any other my friend. Very strong, and dark with underlying currents . Super 7 ..
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Date: 2/19/2016 12:31:00 PM
Dark and beautiful
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Date: 2/9/2016 3:49:00 PM
this is REALLY COOL. Also I love Twilight zone. I think I will fave this one.
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 2/9/2016 6:14:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, always appreciate your visits! Keith;-)
Date: 2/9/2016 12:36:00 PM
- Incredibly well written Keith, profound and interesting - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/9/2016 10:36:00 AM
This is different ,but I love 'different ' keith..Mysterious,somehow enigmatic like a corridor between two labyrinths.
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 2/9/2016 12:10:00 PM
'A corridor between two labrynths' --- well put, exactly like I felt when I wrote it. Thanks for the visit and the comments Charmaine! Keith;-)
Date: 2/8/2016 10:11:00 PM
Keith, welcome to the dark side! This was amazing!
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 2/9/2016 12:06:00 PM
Thanks Arthur, wasn't easy writing; I don't typically tackle 'dark writes' but I'm a 'painter' who uses all the shades if I can from time to time, Mystery of itself always has dark shades, hence the unknown. Glad you enjoyed! Keith;-)

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