Simon Henderson Poet I do not know?

The Ecstasy of Youth

I saw a smurf the other day,
Just after I swallowed a handful of smarties,
I thought they were sweets
But they looked like the things
My brother used to take to his parties.

The trees started talking,
I though it quite strange
Then a poor little dog
Melted into a puddle.
I started to cry,
Tears fell from my eyes
And all i wanted right then
Was a cuddle.

I saw a smurf the other day,
Just after i swallowed a handful of smarties.
I dont think they were sweets
And if thats what they eat
I dont think I'll be going to parties!!!

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Cheryl Glans June 4, 2012 at 12:19 PM Nice metaphor handfull of smarties ;-) Loved reading it!!!!! Simon Henderson June 4, 2012 at 12:21 PM Cheers.....i tried to be imaginative with it.....i thought for ages before i chose the title as well!!

Terry O'Leary June 4, 2012 at 7:38 AM Interesting twist... nice... Terry Simon Henderson June 4, 2012 at 10:54 AM Thank you.....i tried to put a bit of a spin it!!