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The Ecstasy of Youth

I saw a smurf the other day, Just after I swallowed a handful of smarties, I thought they were sweets But they looked like the things My brother used to take to his parties. The trees started talking, I though it quite strange Then a poor little dog Melted into a puddle. I started to cry, Tears fell from my eyes And all i wanted right then Was a cuddle. I saw a smurf the other day, Just after i swallowed a handful of smarties. I dont think they were sweets And if thats what they eat I dont think I'll be going to parties!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/4/2012 12:19:00 PM
Nice metaphor handfull of smarties ;-) Loved reading it!!!!!
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Simon Henderson
Date: 6/4/2012 12:21:00 PM
Cheers.....i tried to be imaginative with it.....i thought for ages before i chose the title as well!!
Date: 6/4/2012 7:38:00 AM
Interesting twist... nice... Terry
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Simon Henderson
Date: 6/4/2012 10:54:00 AM
Thank you.....i tried to put a bit of a spin it!!

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