The Eclipse At Chibok

They crept in howling darkness,

With guns, machetes and 
bombs,

Bringing down our walls,

Our gate, the center could not 
hold.



They whispered in thundering 
tones,

Spraying their bullets at will,

First on our mai guard,

and then, on the little dog that 
barked.



Fears rained on our roofs,

We were awakened from a 
beautiful dream 

To behold a nightmare;

A husking reality.



We hugged ourselves,

In tears and prayers,

Waiting for the shadows to 
drench us,

Waiting for death to engulf us.



Come out!!! they shouted

Be on a single queue

Una wan go school ba?

Their voice roaring like thunder.



Echoes of dust splattered.

Chaos of terror fell from our 
skin.

As we marched into the truck,

Freedom was stripped from our 
breast.



Paths grew darker,

Our mind fell from our hearts

We were laid on a slate

To become a skeletal fling of an 
endless war.



We were girls yesterday

We are now slaves with no will

Mere toys for men's pleasure.

Someone please help, someone 
help please.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/10/2016 2:48:00 PM
Hi Chijioke, I enjoyed reading your excellent poem today. Thanks for sharing Love SKAT
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Date: 6/24/2014 2:13:00 PM
I shake but am strong, as i read this powerful writting, I hope this men on top could read this, instead of chanting there is god ohhhhhh....., what a play, bring back our girls, thanks chijioke, nwannem Richard Nnoli.
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Chijioke Oguno
Date: 6/24/2014 2:36:00 PM
My brother.....the state of affairs have dried our eyes and our throat sore from the lamentations.
Date: 6/24/2014 1:55:00 PM
Ps., This Is Powerful, As Very Disturbing: Hang In There Baby Girl! |*.*\(*{{....
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Date: 6/24/2014 1:47:00 PM
We live in such a cold and cruel world. Nothing has ever changed within this place. Words, cannot even be grasped to explain or describe the 'Evil' which flows through countless lives ~ If this world does not think that it's their those's wickedness is upon the threshold of, Nevermore ? They've got another thing coming....KLove *
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Chijioke Oguno
Date: 6/24/2014 2:37:00 PM
Evil hungers for more darkness
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