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The Early Warning French Window

The Early Warning French Window
David J Walker

The unmistakable tapping
At the protruding 
French windows in
The breakfast nook
Is the early warning system
I’ve relied on 
betraying the otherwise
Silent arrival of a wintery day

Sleet and ice announce its 
Comings and goings 
before the unseen dawn 
The darkness extended to noon

Gray will be the color of today
Pitched against the icy white
And I might just stay 
Right here 
Watching the world from my
French Window

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 10/26/2020 10:22:00 AM
Hello David Walker, yes we do get early warnings of the winter season coming. From our windows and patio doors. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/26/2020 3:19:00 PM
Hello David, our leaves are still falling. It is getting colder now. yes I enjoyed this poem. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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David Walker
Date: 10/26/2020 11:14:00 AM
Thank you, Darlene. So glad you enjoyed the poem. Have a great day too

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