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The Dying Day

Eyes shrouded how bright the sky burns tonight summers dying show







Contest : Nature Monoku ~ Single Line 
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Ingibo Benson

June 21, 2011 at 3:25 PM

Beautiful poem

Chhutan Dey

June 21, 2011 at 4:06 AM

EXCELLENT WRITE...

Neha Sharma

June 12, 2011 at 2:03 AM

fantastic....

Anne Rutherford

June 8, 2011 at 6:36 AM

Nick fabulous monoku , a sure winner .Anne

Wilma Neels

June 8, 2011 at 4:37 AM

Wow, you have one splendid monoku here Nick, awesome imagery!! I can identify with this as we are heading for a cold winter over here...

Red Fiery

June 6, 2011 at 6:59 AM

very meaningful Nick !

Andrea Dietrich

June 2, 2011 at 10:00 PM

It's interesting you saw it as sunset. I think others thought like you ,while for me it was sunrise! Very nice, Nick.

Nick Bagnall

June 3, 2011 at 6:20 AM

probably depends on where in the world you live and when you'd expect to see the sky that colour, herre it's more normal in the evening.

Autumn Ehrhardt

June 1, 2011 at 9:39 AM

How true to be touched by light and lost summer nights. Great word choice. Thanks for commenting on my poem. Enjoy your skies. Autumn

Nette Onclaud

June 1, 2011 at 9:31 AM

i like the way you used eyes as having human qualities, nick.. grreat job!! dunno about the 100 views, really? .. i guess people just click new titles , then come back for look-see, look-see... others have 300! oh oh! winning's best to you! :)hugggs, nette