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The Dying Day

Eyes shrouded how bright the sky burns tonight summers dying show Contest : Nature Monoku ~ Single Line Did not place

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Ingibo Benson

Date: 6/21/2011 3:25:00 PM

Beautiful poem

Chhutan Dey

Date: 6/21/2011 4:06:00 AM

EXCELLENT WRITE...

Neha Sharma

Date: 6/12/2011 2:03:00 AM

fantastic....

Anne Rutherford

Date: 6/8/2011 6:36:00 AM

Nick fabulous monoku , a sure winner .Anne

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/8/2011 4:37:00 AM

Wow, you have one splendid monoku here Nick, awesome imagery!! I can identify with this as we are heading for a cold winter over here...

Red Fiery

Date: 6/6/2011 6:59:00 AM

very meaningful Nick !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/2/2011 10:00:00 PM

It's interesting you saw it as sunset. I think others thought like you ,while for me it was sunrise! Very nice, Nick.

Nick Bagnall
Date: 6/3/2011 6:20:00 AM

probably depends on where in the world you live and when you'd expect to see the sky that colour, herre it's more normal in the evening.

Autumn Ehrhardt

Date: 6/1/2011 9:39:00 AM

How true to be touched by light and lost summer nights. Great word choice. Thanks for commenting on my poem. Enjoy your skies. Autumn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/1/2011 9:31:00 AM

i like the way you used eyes as having human qualities, nick.. grreat job!! dunno about the 100 views, really? .. i guess people just click new titles , then come back for look-see, look-see... others have 300! oh oh! winning's best to you! :)hugggs, nette

David Williams

Date: 6/1/2011 9:24:00 AM

i like this nick, short but says a lot, i agree about the knife. David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/1/2011 9:01:00 AM

vibrant and very visual Nick.. imagination running wild with this Monoku ..good luck in the contest luv..

Cory Long

Date: 6/1/2011 6:05:00 AM

nice job good luck in the contest cory