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The Dull Green Light

Amongst the bark of trees 
there shines a light
a light not bright
yet still illuminates the night
dull, green and spherical it floats
within the forest
it appears to gloat
it's maniacal grin spreads
and causes unrest
but yet brings comfort
to souls lost

The green gradually fades
and a new shade is seen
the shade of red.

It's shape contorts and twists
becomes enraged and unreliable
the light is not definable
by human nor god
it rises and sits aloft the trees
as if it is defining itself
a greater being
a power unseen
the light pulses, jolts and flashes
suddenly implodes and turns to ashes

The dull green light never was and never will be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/12/2012 8:10:00 AM
Hi nice one you have (soup mail)
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Date: 6/12/2012 7:44:00 AM
nice write Daniel,enjoyed
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Date: 6/12/2012 7:20:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup Daniel, hope you will have fun with poetry and write, read and comments a lot of poems with us. - You write very well, like your poem Daniel. - Have a lovely week. Hello from Norway and me Anne-Lise :)
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