The Duckling

Black wings fluttering Pecking at pale prison walls- Now free for cold swim

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Robin Davis

Date: 4/16/2014 8:51:00 AM

Amy Such a creative way to write about nature and baby ducks freed from their "prison". Thank you for the nice comment on my Wedding Bliss poem.

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/12/2012 1:52:00 PM

Very nice Haiku of Nature, loved always, bl

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/7/2012 1:58:00 AM

sound like Alcatraz to me, Amy, could be way out? anyhow love the imagery. harry

Deborah Burch

Date: 5/6/2012 4:58:00 PM

baby ducks!!:) Sooo beautiful!! Nicely done and nice to meet you Amy!! thanks for the visit, hope to see more of you...big hugs, love deb

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/6/2012 10:05:00 AM

Amy, I especially liked the image in the first two lines, the black wings and him pecking at pale prison walls. it's great to see you again. How have you been?

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 5/6/2012 7:47:00 AM

Beautifully written!!