The Drinkers Dilema

I am the bleary eyed bemoaner
of self made misery
my body's not a temple
its more of a distillery
drinking doesnt numb the pain
but it numbs my awareness of it
sat talking to myself in the corner
like a sodden surly hobbit
the main reason your gone
is 'cus my drinking went on
and on, and on
i am the president of the broken soul society
yet im not even tempted by sobriety
wondering why i cant ever seem to keep my 
perpetual misery in check
as i pour another glass of liquid depression
down my grateful neck
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Austin Avatar
November 14, 2012 at 10:00 AM
"My body's not a temple, it's more of a distillery." Good line. Congrats on the selection. daver
Kamal Avatar
November 4, 2012 at 4:18 AM
I love it really! Very expressive...I like how you linked the image of "liquid depression" so creative...Keep it up Vincent, Omneya
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