The Dreaming Tree

So long I thought my trust was gone
withered in a vase that sat 
unwatered neglected posterity's memory 
pressed and ordered flat

I suppose some slight yet weak desire
believed that someday still
I'd find one soul who's promise transpired 
while building false hopes unskilled

For trust is like a pillow
flipped to the cooler side
It's the hand that touches your shoulder gently
when you let down your guard to cry

It's the feeling when your turned around
lost in the land of strange
the hand that reaches leading the way
to familiar surroundings in exchange

It's the peace in knowing no matter what's wrong
you needn't look far or wonder how long
your help will come from day to day
leaning on the one who finds a way

There's a trust in a dreamer 
who's so much like you
when "soon" emerges all too slowly
two with the same dream can make it come true

This is the trust proven not wooed
so much alike you needn't explain
they knew your thoughts without having to say
for the look in your eyes gave it away

Flattery with all it's tantalizing charm
sounds sweet like honey going down 
but only as fulfilling as a country farm
in a picture with a frame going round

In this o'l world when "with you in spirit"
is the saying most commonly known...
here I stand with you hand in hand
is the proof your not alone

Trust did not come easy for me
so hard to build so easy to break
all the hidden agendas I feared
the slow to give and quick to take

But on the day we first did speak
of promises given or made
you said your arms my safest place
by what you do not what you say

For that ONE key was ever lacking
the door love enters at the start
for all enchantment love can bring
trust is what opens the FOREVER in my heart

As I think of these diamonds on my finger
sparkles halo the chocolate center stone
the thought that never leaves my heart
is the lifetime I felt so alone

A ring that tells the story
of a beauties life in the dark
surrounded now by clarity 
of the trust that owns my heart

Trust is the love I never knew
you'll live for me, I'll die for you
with tux and gown, yes and boots
in the life we've made and say "I Do"

Never again to live in wonder
if dreams will ever come true
there's no joy surpassing you see
then living a dream too long overdue

In quiet reflection of all that's been
the room you gave my heart to know
the freedom you gave then gave again
the seed you planted then watched it grow

A dreaming tree you knew in time
would bear the fruit of love
a love that took forever to find
nourished in the soil of trust

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/30/2014 6:10:00 AM
powerful piece sari and the ending just flowed golden pen dear friend
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/30/2014 6:13:00 AM
sorry sarai
Date: 8/10/2014 2:27:00 AM
I've never read yir' stuff if I recall correctly...but I notice that your archive carries some really smooth titles. This one is the same as one of my favorite songs, by DMB...."The Dreaming Tree", although your poem is very much different, and I did enjoy reading it twice. Good STUFF>live your dream long overdue! ~JSLambert
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Date: 7/8/2014 9:45:00 AM
Absolutely Robert, thanks for the sweet comment. Take care my friend.
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Date: 7/2/2014 9:32:00 AM
A fantastic epic, title n all, it's great how u pick and relate relatable details throughout. Like the pilow warm side n all. Lovely rhyming too. Nice to read u again. Take care.
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Sarai Virden
Date: 7/8/2014 9:53:00 AM
So nice to hear from you! Thank you dear one.
Date: 6/28/2014 2:47:00 AM
Trust is a clear stream flowing smoothly out to sea. One unnatural ripple changes all. This is a fine write !
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Sarai Virden
Date: 7/8/2014 9:52:00 AM
Absolutely Robert, thanks for the sweet comment. Take care my friend.
Date: 6/27/2014 8:16:00 PM
Honor, trust and loyalty, even hard work at times are all the building blocks to the enchanted forest. This is such a wonderful poem, loved this one!
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Sarai Virden
Date: 7/8/2014 9:44:00 AM
Thank you Arthur, glad to hear you enjoyed this one. Hope you had a great 4th of July :-)
Date: 6/27/2014 2:15:00 PM
Trust is the hardest thing to gain and the easiest to lose,,,I love it Sarai hugs Tim
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Sarai Virden
Date: 6/27/2014 5:00:00 PM
Hey Tim, yes, promises and good intentions will never take the place of the one who's actions speak louder than words. Dating in search of the right man for me was frustrating beyond words. So glad my search is over. Hope you have a great weekend! Hugs back :-)
Date: 6/27/2014 12:38:00 PM
- A wonderful poem, a life is about to feeling confident .... dreams that came and dreams that died ... and true love - Really very well written, Sarai !!!! - I wish you a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Sarai Virden
Date: 6/27/2014 12:45:00 PM
Thank you Anne Lise, you have a wonderful weekend as well. Big hugs!
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