The Dreaming

engraved on cliff face shimmering silver shadow from the dreaming time

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Date: 4/13/2010 7:58:00 PM

Nice use of imagery and alliteration for a creative view. I really like the second line. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind words on mine. Karen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/13/2010 12:39:00 PM

Very nice one, is it for the contest? Do you have weird dreams like my "lost" dreams? I met a few poets here who had similar dreams. I don't feel lost, so I dont' really know what those crazy things signify. Anyway, lately I've not been having weird dreams. I wish my childhood DREAMING poems would come back to me! LUv, andrea

Audrey Haick

Date: 4/12/2010 4:38:00 PM

Hey Maggie, Just stopped by to see what you've been up to!..been a little busy, like me, I guess, huh? I wish you good luck in the contest with this great Haiku...Definitely a winner in my book...Trust you're well...Love, your friend, Audrey

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/12/2010 6:35:00 AM

what a dreamy haiku, your title captures it well :)