The Dreaming

engraved on cliff face

shimmering silver shadow 

from the dreaming time
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 13, 2010 at 7:58 PM
Nice use of imagery and alliteration for a creative view. I really like the second line. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind words on mine. Karen
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April 13, 2010 at 12:39 PM
Very nice one, is it for the contest? Do you have weird dreams like my "lost" dreams? I met a few poets here who had similar dreams. I don't feel lost, so I dont' really know what those crazy things signify. Anyway, lately I've not been having weird dreams. I wish my childhood DREAMING poems would come back to me! LUv, andrea
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April 12, 2010 at 4:38 PM
Hey Maggie, Just stopped by to see what you've been up to!..been a little busy, like me, I guess, huh? I wish you good luck in the contest with this great Haiku...Definitely a winner in my book...Trust you're well...Love, your friend, Audrey
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April 12, 2010 at 6:35 AM
what a dreamy haiku, your title captures it well :)
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