The Dream

Last night I had a vivid dream  
 Where I met the Lord Supreme 
 Illuminated by brilliant light
 We discussed the worlds plight

 God didn't care about your tweet       
 Or how many friends you delete
 Wasn't impressed with face book shares
 Or how your profile picture compares

 The Creator wants the world to know
 He sees how uncomfortable it is to grow
 His sons flesh was considered weak
 because he chose to serve the meek

 All of us so incredibly unique
 Our human nature doesn't always think 
 of the multiple consequences that we speak
 how it causes other hearts to sink

 I have been a victim of both
 innocent and malicious dictum
 I have also been a perpetrator
 Oh damn that human instinct generator

 The hardest thing in the world to do
 Is smile when the world is askew
 So I offer a simple reminder, God Loves You
 That is the only certainty that is true

 I awoke in a glorious fantasy field
 rejuvenated and feeling semi-healed 
 As I was inspired, I felt compelled to yield
 Towards the face of our gentle human shield

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 1/25/2017 2:05:00 PM
So nicely conceived and penned, Donna...Very well done - A much deserved seven! My best regards. :) john
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Date: 2/6/2017 6:42:00 PM
Thanks for taking the time John!
Date: 1/25/2017 1:16:00 PM
Fabulous write.
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Donna Roberts
Date: 1/25/2017 1:41:00 PM
Thankyou Elizabeth
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