The Dream

Sensations is the word for the entire treasure, And life is what allows to say That feeling every single pleasure, Makes people find their dream away. And in that dream they put desire, And they put hope for every scent, And all the senses we admire And never let their will to bend. The so called peace that all we need, The so called light we're searching for, That's what the dream is for indeed That's what we all have dreamed before. And when the light's about to reach, And when the peace it's on it's way You feel the kind in every speech And bless you find in every pray. The blind can see the stars that dance, The deaf can hear the wind that sings, And every whisper is a trance That makes even the rocks find wings. And when the dream is no more pain, And all the chains are no more doubt, You know your heart contains a stain And that the dream is love about. 01/13/2008
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Agustin Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 12:51 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 18, 2016 at 10:21 AM
RALUCA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
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December 5, 2015 at 8:05 PM
Raluca, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
Tsiluma Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 10:21 AM
Very well done Raluca! The dream does not often turn to reality but it is what keeps hope alive. I love how you've managed to rhyme so effortlessly - it adds a smooth flow to the poem that makes it very pleasurable to read. I'm looking forward to read more from you.
Sanders Avatar
May 21, 2013 at 7:24 PM
Nicely done poet
Brown Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 6:22 AM
I am stopping back to see if you have added any new poems to your list. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry with the world Raluca. You have taken a big step here and I wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. I will check back again another day. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 1:11 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you today Raluca. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
Palmer Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 10:42 AM
wonderful write Raluca,welcome to the Soup,with this well written piece
Ratiu Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 5:29 PM
Thank you, Richard, its good to be here!
Robillard Avatar
October 13, 2012 at 5:54 PM
Beautiful poem. I really enjoyed reading it. Great job :)
Ratiu Avatar
October 13, 2012 at 6:02 PM
Thank you, Sabrina, i appreciate it! :*
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