Notes About The Poem
Written in Minichu format (subset of Rhyme)
The door opens
the door opened ajar
there stood a drunken man with an empty bottle
looking afar
pleading in eye
hobbled in, a shaky wobble
bit high
got Ales
mouthful gobble
bales
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