The Door Opens

The door opens,
and there he stands.
Knife in hand,
searching the room
for his victim.

Heavy footsteps
rhythmically fall
on the cabin floor.
The stench of sweat
assaults my nose.

I whimper
beneath the bed,
praying that I will
not be noticed,
or my story will end.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Gibbons Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 8:53 AM
A tense well written ✍️ 🚪 door poem Angelia so captivated me, I could feel the tension, 😨 fear of lying under bed. Fixtated by terror 👀 hugzzz 🫂
Kitchin Avatar
August 31, 2026 at 2:51 PM
Angelia, a well penned captivating poem.
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