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The Door

By the time I write this it will be history. No longer some great mystery. Everyone thought I had tried my best. But I failed the most important test. What they think will no longer matter. Now that my life is in tatters. Alone for good with an empty space where you stood. I drove you to the brink of exhaustion. Until eventually you gave way to caution. Packed up your things and told me no more. Put on your coat and walked out the door.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/16/2018 11:29:00 PM
It is so refreshing to see someone take the blame for something - anything! This poem shines with integrity and truth. So nicely written, Patrick, please keep writing.
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