The Dolls (End Line Poem)

My dolls are not from ******* CHINA
Porcelain faces are on my *** DOLLS
Both have brown hair, they ** ARE
In my office. They are ****** BEAUTIFUL
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 24, 2010 at 3:49 AM
Dear June Ellen, A Masterpiece of POETIC ART in the Form " End Line Word " I Thank-YOU for YOUR Support and Participation in Establishing This new Form of POETRY Your Talented Words are a Welcomed Refreshment Thank-YOU Again YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG
Nelson Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 3:14 PM
this is a new form of poetry to me, it seems very simple, but sometimes simplicity is a good escape
Owens Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 9:44 PM
Cool end line poem...Good luck if it's for the contest...Marty
Kendrick Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 5:36 PM
Great end-line write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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