The Distracted Walking Law

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Honolulu has banned pedestrians from looking at mobile phones, texting or using digital devices while crossing the road. The measure is aimed at reducing injuries and deaths from "distracted walking". The new legislation, which will come into effect on 25 October 2017, states that "no pedestrian shall cross a street or highway while viewing a mobile electronic device".

Zombie Texting Chicken Promenade

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No walking while distracted - that's the law Don't leave the kerb and step under a bus Don't oggle that hulk, nor admire that chick Keep all eyes on the road No rocking along to music box No whistling or humming allowed No eating a burger while strolling No admiring the view or star gazing No distracting thoughts either Why Oh Why is it chicken now, to cross the road!

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Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 7/29/2017 3:06:00 PM

You left out, 'no talking on your cell phone or texting' while walking or driving.. Another insightful offering.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 7/29/2017 3:00:00 PM

Lol awesome. It has come to this., needing laws, fodder for poets. xomo

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/29/2017 2:49:00 PM

Good one John. What a great last line ! :)