The distance

You're on my mind 
Alike the flower trees 
Blooming in the breeze 
And sounding soft breath

Between you and I 
The distance is just right 
It's neither too distal
For ears to hear 
Nor too blurry 
For eyes to stare
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Pan Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 10:02 PM
No earthly beauty is absolute and perfect. Appropriate distance helps to neglect the imperfectness of beauty
Rose  Avatar
August 30, 2025 at 10:35 PM
beautiful
Pan Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 4:49 AM
Cheers! Rose, you have my all the best wishes!
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