The Disciple

I had a thought,
it was a great one...
it burned like the sun

I had a dream,
it was larger than real...
it stays within me still

I had a calling,
it was all I knew...
I was the "chosen few"

I had a choice,
I decided His way...
I thank the Lord - every day!



For "Two to Twelve" contest sponsored by Brian Strand.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 7:16 PM
Wow, this is really nice, my friend. A much deserved win . Congratulations.
Guzzi Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 7:04 PM
short and sweet Congrad's Light & Love
Arno Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 6:16 PM
Congratulations on your amazing write. Good job. Best regards, Jon
Bunton Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 3:27 PM
Congratulations. His way is the best way!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 11:30 AM
Congrats on your win for this wonderful poem!! Blessings, Rhonda
Quigley Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 10:36 AM
Congratulations on your placement at the top of the heap. Well done George
Brown Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 10:06 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Brian's "Two to Twelve" contest George. Love, Carol
Wesley Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 7:53 PM
A thought, a dream, a calling and a choice; you wove it all so beautifully. A special one to think upon.
Scholtz Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 1:30 PM
Lovely, good luck in the contest george. Elizabeth
Merryman Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 1:30 PM
Enjoyed your poem very much, George. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim
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