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The Dirge of the Rain

"I like it when it rains hard. It sounds like white noise everywhere, which is like silence but not empty." -Mark Haddon And so it pours again Tonight. Not champagne— Just a cup of hot coffee To drown what we used to be. To the melody of white I weep, Lying here so close to sleep; With wet wings that can't fly, Soaked clothes that won’t dry; Rain that won’t cease: Pain that won’t ease. (29/5/2013)

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Date: 7/8/2013 8:06:00 AM
Beautiful chain couplets.. *salam kenal* ;) - Shirley
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Date: 6/7/2013 9:42:00 AM
Hi Adam... congratulations with your winning poem... in Heather's contest... Linda
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Date: 6/3/2013 2:50:00 PM
i like the title and the poem fulfills its promise - nice one! congrats on your win...
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Date: 6/3/2013 1:33:00 PM
The title intrigued me, and the poem itself is full of awesome imagery. Big congrats on your win in my contest!
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Date: 5/30/2013 12:00:00 PM
congrats on your win with this great write Adam
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Date: 5/30/2013 9:34:00 AM
Big congrats on your outstanding win. AO
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Date: 5/30/2013 9:13:00 AM
congrats on your Honorable Mention in my contest
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