The Dirge of the Rain

"I like it when it rains hard. 
It sounds like white noise everywhere, 
which is like silence but not empty."
-Mark Haddon

And so it pours again
Tonight. Not champagne—
Just a cup of hot coffee
To drown what we used to be.
To the melody of white I weep,
Lying here so close to sleep;
With wet wings that can't fly,
Soaked clothes that won’t dry;
Rain that won’t cease:
Pain that won’t ease.

(29/5/2013)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Candy Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 8:06 AM
Beautiful chain couplets.. *salam kenal* ;) - Shirley
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June 7, 2013 at 9:42 AM
Hi Adam... congratulations with your winning poem... in Heather's contest... Linda
Bauer Avatar
June 3, 2013 at 2:50 PM
i like the title and the poem fulfills its promise - nice one! congrats on your win...
Ober Avatar
June 3, 2013 at 1:33 PM
The title intrigued me, and the poem itself is full of awesome imagery. Big congrats on your win in my contest!
May Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 12:00 PM
congrats on your win with this great write Adam
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May 30, 2013 at 9:34 AM
Big congrats on your outstanding win. AO
Roberts Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 9:13 AM
congrats on your Honorable Mention in my contest
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