The Difference Between Night and Day

Dawn pulled up the drape
Night had pulled down, still toy.
Red Sun, wound up again. Laughs.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Nance Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 4:26 PM
Very interestingly worded, well done. ;)
Beckman  Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 6:01 PM
Thanks :)
Horsman Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 4:19 PM
Clever poetry,love this. Harry
Beckman  Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 6:01 PM
Thanks! :)
Man Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 10:11 PM
Nancy, I enjoyed your playful but vivid imagery!
Beckman  Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 6:00 PM
Thank you! :)
Michael Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 9:17 PM
So is life...day in day out...curtains up curtain down...Nice write...All the best Nancy
Beckman  Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 5:59 PM
Thank you!
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