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The Difference Between Night and Day

Dawn pulled up the drape Night had pulled down, still toy. Red Sun, wound up again. Laughs.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/28/2018 4:26:00 PM
Very interestingly worded, well done. ;)
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Nancy Beckman
Date: 7/29/2018 6:01:00 PM
Thanks :)
Date: 7/28/2018 4:19:00 PM
Clever poetry,love this. Harry
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Nancy Beckman
Date: 7/29/2018 6:01:00 PM
Thanks! :)
Date: 7/27/2018 10:11:00 PM
Nancy, I enjoyed your playful but vivid imagery!
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Nancy Beckman
Date: 7/29/2018 6:00:00 PM
Thank you! :)
Date: 7/27/2018 9:17:00 PM
So is life...day in day out...curtains up curtain down...Nice write...All the best Nancy
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Nancy Beckman
Date: 7/29/2018 5:59:00 PM
Thank you!

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