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The Devils Whispers

the devil came to me last night and he whispered in my ear he told me to kill myself and up my spine shot shivers of fear i thought it was only a dream but i realized i was wide awake and in my heart if i did his bidding i know my soul he would take then again one morning when i opened up my eyes i heard him try to speak he may have twisted up my tongue, but as i got stronger each day he got weak he only comes to me when i'm sad, angry, lonely or depressed but then again of course the devils comes for only God's very best!!!

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Date: 10/6/2011 2:59:00 PM
How true that last line is John. A dark poem with great feeling in it - how are you these days? Thanks for your visit my friend!
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Date: 8/13/2011 12:32:00 PM
Yeah, I agree with your last line. Thanks for posting this meaningful writing.
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Date: 8/8/2011 4:48:00 AM
This is great John..really i luv the last line!!!!!!!
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Date: 8/7/2011 2:01:00 PM
Nice write mate know who you feel like the humor and the spiritual aspect...with love...old Jack
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