The Devil Is Waiting

The devil is taking over our lands.
Evil is dripping down from his hands

He patiently waits to drive his hate into us
All it takes is one moment when our faith we distrust

Then there he is leaving his fowl mark
On a heart that is now turning so dark

The strength of his power, oh how it grows
With each drop of blood that gushes and flows

This evil can be beaten and removed from our lives
Through only belief of a faith that survives.

Stand firm in your faith, pray every day
The devil is waiting to steel you away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 4/5/2015 9:29:00 AM
Liked your poem Janet, The Devil Is Waiting.. He is going to have to wait longer, his time is coming.. HALLELUJAH......ON this EASTER morning, Jesus Christ has won the Victory for EVER!!!
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Date: 3/11/2015 6:45:00 AM
the imagery and the conclusion with Hope..... Brilliant!
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Date: 3/4/2015 8:04:00 AM
Excellent!
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Janet Eaton
Date: 3/4/2015 8:16:00 AM
Thank you Anna
Date: 3/4/2015 7:23:00 AM
Yes devil surrounds us always but I so believe that if we fill our minds and hearts with God's words and we do it.. I know we will never be defeated! I have this monoku-- FINALLY, WE WON... :)! God bless us all//olive eloisa
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Janet Eaton
Date: 3/4/2015 7:34:00 AM
Thanks for stopping in Olive and commenting. Have a great day Janet
Date: 3/3/2015 12:54:00 AM
Deep thoughts Janet and well expressed. It sort of touches a similar theme to my poem 'Loving Opposites.' How to we transform 'The Devil?'
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Janet Eaton
Date: 3/3/2015 5:07:00 AM
Thank you David. I will have to read your poem Have a blessed day. Janet
Date: 3/2/2015 8:00:00 AM
Wise words!
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Janet Eaton
Date: 3/3/2015 5:06:00 AM
Hi Richard, thank you for stopping in and commenting. Have a blessed day. Janet
Date: 3/1/2015 7:31:00 AM
There is so much darkness, we must all remember to be the sun and shine his light. Be strong and sweet Janet :)
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Janet Eaton
Date: 3/3/2015 5:06:00 AM
Thank you for stopping in Casarah, yes there too much darkness in our news today. That is what prompted this poem. Hugs Janet
Date: 3/1/2015 6:46:00 AM
Dear Janet, I am doing Very well.. In fact ,my memory, etc. is Better than it was before, and How Close the Lord IS to me.. I rejoice in Him. He is My All in All.. No one can believe I had a stroke :)
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Date: 2/28/2015 7:57:00 PM
Loved it.. The poem I wrote Changes is a true story. This past November I had a stroke.It was so bad Loss of my memory and all that goes with it.. A few days after I came home from the hospital, I woke up and remembered I had not been praying. I had lost my memory of Jesus, prayer and all.. Then I asked God the Father, in the name of Lord Jesus Christ to restore to me all that satan had stolen from me and He did. I could not live without my Lord!
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Janet Eaton
Date: 3/1/2015 3:50:00 AM
Hi Edith., Thank you for your comments. What a story, hope you are doing well now. Hugs Janet
Date: 2/28/2015 6:08:00 PM
Amen! I have been a prayer warrior and have battled many times against this enemy of our soul. Good word! God bless.
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Janet Eaton
Date: 2/28/2015 6:45:00 PM
Thank you Marilyn
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