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The Devil Came Knocking At My Door

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The Devil came knocking at my door, Coming in disguise, enticing me to the dance floor. He whispered in my ear, saying he owned my soul. Then I felt his manipulative evil, trying to take control. I got out my Bible and began to read His word. And I knew my prayers to God had not gone unheard. Be careful which door you decide to open, If you lose perspective, you could end up lost and broken.

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Date: 5/28/2016 1:25:00 PM
Great advice and needed warning to heed Brenda, indeed the devil does come knocking but by his grace we don't need to open it. Have blessed day, Gordon
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Date: 5/27/2016 12:25:00 PM
Lot of truth here. Good lines, Brenda!
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Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 5/27/2016 12:40:00 PM
Thank you, and thanks for commenting Drake!

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