The Desolate People

Downhearted and  d e j e c t e d, 
              feeling completely defected- 
Woebegone and despairing, 
                      a life never repairing.
Utterly disconnected, 
  they  s i l e n t l y  speak undetected.

         The people of the night are pained,
where only heartache remained-
      C r e s t f a l l e n  and downcast, 
only misery can last.
                   No happiness contained, 
no atonement refrained. 

Seen only when they are down, 
             always wearing a heavyhearted frown-
Least of concerned and  i g n o r e d, 
living a life so abhorred. 
       Alone in this God-forsaken town, 
with no one to care around. 

        He knows not a life of adoration, 
just  u n g r a t e f u l  for his creation-
         She knows not a life of contentment, 
but lives in constant resentment. 
Until they feel a loving sensation...
                                        they will live in utter  D E S O L A T I O N. 



People Poetry Contest
December 11, 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Thomas Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 11:27 AM
It is truly sad the number of neglected people; for whatever reason. A beautiful write.
Williams Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 12:13 PM
Laura, congratulations on your very well-penned poem and strong placement! Also, thank you for bringing to light the plight of too many in our society. I wish you and yours the happiest of holidays and an amazing 2018! :) Bartholomew
Dutta Avatar
December 12, 2017 at 12:46 PM
Congrats Laura to win on your wonderful poem. love
Scars Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 5:19 AM
thank you sweet Anisha! :) -luloo
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 12, 2017 at 12:52 AM
Congrats on your great win, Laura.
Scars Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 5:19 AM
thank you sweet Subimal :) -luloo
Roper Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 7:26 PM
Laura, nice write, nice rhyme, congratulations on your win :) Hugs
Scars Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 5:19 AM
many thanks dearest poetess! :) -luloo
Rodrigues Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 6:58 PM
Especially the final stanza! Congrats, Luloo!
Scars Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 5:19 AM
thank you sweet Kim! :) -luloo
Lamoureux Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 6:30 PM
Thanks for entering my contest, congrats on your 4th place finish.
Scars Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 5:18 AM
thank ou so much for my awesome placement dear Richard! I am honored :) luloo
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