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The Desert

Miles and miles you travel but see an empty desert jaded and exhausted by such a long walk you enjoy a frozen dessert No trees, no water, nothing is found except for sand and dirt but one special thing found nowhere else is the peace and silence of the desert Desert snakes, quicksands are a few dangers so, protect yourselves and be alert but if you feel your safe enough you enjoy a frozen dessert

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Beata Agustin

Date: 9/25/2024 7:07:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2016 8:14:00 PM

Mohammed, nice to see this one again. LINDA

Skat A

Date: 12/31/2015 10:40:00 PM

:) skat

Kamran Rashid

Date: 4/22/2015 9:45:00 AM

a/a bhai a powerful imagination put forth plz keep me posted in your poems and find some time to read a few of mine--

Mohammed Shafeek
Date: 5/1/2015 1:38:00 AM

Thank u bro...in sha allah i will read ur poems

Skat A

Date: 4/15/2015 6:16:00 PM

MOHAMMED, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Mohammed Shafeek
Date: 4/20/2016 9:39:00 AM

THANKS A LOT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/15/2015 7:14:00 AM

- I wish you Mohammed and your first poem here at the P Soup welcome - Always nice with new "poet" friends - Good luck, looking forward to many more poems in the future - // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/14/2015 6:02:00 PM

This is a fine poem Mohammed, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@