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The Depth of My Love

Jump in feet first and sink 
             Into the depth of my love 
               Immerse yourself as if
              You're being swallowed
                Wholly and gradually
                    By a quicksand
                     Ankle-to-knee
                     Knee-to-torso
                     Torso-to-neck
                        Neck-to-.....


Literary devices: alliteration, allusion, imagery, pun
Date writted and posted: 11/02/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Murray Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 5:07 PM
I like it!!
Ibeh Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 11:45 PM
Thank you very much, Jean!
Pandit Avatar
November 4, 2018 at 6:44 AM
Well adorned in depth of love!
Ibeh Avatar
November 4, 2018 at 2:03 PM
Thank you very much, Vijay!:-) Much appreciated.
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