The Departure

When the soul departs, All things are falling apart. I am breaking up.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Dietrich Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 1:12 PM
oh it looks like a haiku (senryu) . I really like this, Sunita.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 5:57 AM
Hi dear thks. I was trying to compose a haiku but i missed some syllables. Ha ha ha ...Sunita UPD
Buhagiar Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 10:55 PM
Dying is separation of body and soul. Find bliss.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 5:58 AM
Thks...yes the process is what ive tried to describe. :) Have recomposed to fit a senryu...Sunita UPD
Gregory Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 7:37 PM
Such depth, wow.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 5:59 AM
Hi thanks. Your words mean a lot.:) Sunita UPD
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