Curtis Moorman Poet Rhyme

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The Demise of the Departed

THE DEMISE OF THE DEPARTED

It matters not what lies below
It's only a body in decomposition
The marker a resting place for a crow
The body below awaits a transition
One day that body will be resurrected
Let's pray their eternity is what they expected


	27 September 2019
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Line Gauthier March 2, 2020 at 1:04 PM Well penned, Curtis. Enjoyed.

Joseph May October 3, 2019 at 8:51 PM All hope for that transition to eternity, Congrats on your win Curtis.. Curtis Moorman October 24, 2019 at 7:01 PM Thank you, Joseph, and forgive my lateness in responding. I appreciate your support.

Timothy Mcguire September 29, 2019 at 4:19 PM Love it Curtis Well written Curtis Moorman October 24, 2019 at 7:01 PM Timothy, my friend, please forgive my lateness in responding to your comment. I have been doing a little traveling --- retirement allows that!!! Thanks for your comment. You always encourage me and I appreciate it.

Debra Squyres September 27, 2019 at 5:17 PM Excellent interpretative poem !! Curtis Moorman October 24, 2019 at 6:59 PM Thank you so much, Debra! I apologize for not responding sooner, but I have been on extended vacation. Pigeon Forge was beginning to have the regular beauty in the leaf changes. Retirement is wonderful.

Carolyn Devonshire September 27, 2019 at 2:46 PM The finality of earthly life is well expressed in your poem, Curtis. Hope there aren't too many surprises on Judgment Day. Excellent writing! Hugs, carolyn Curtis Moorman October 24, 2019 at 6:57 PM Thank you, Carolyn! My apology for being so late in responding. I have been on extended vacation. I just love retirement!! lol It's so good to hear from you!