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" THE DEMISE" FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, MY PHOTO,©

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The more Man disregards nature's immutable laws the closer his demise brings! © Demetrios Trifiatis 18 August 2018

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Date: 8/22/2018 3:18:00 PM
True. The irony is that it is not heeded by those with a higher education. Great photo. Very best regards David
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Date: 8/13/2018 9:38:00 AM
God has created the cosmos and established divine laws to be venerated by Man for his very own good establishment on earth.. But when Man fails to give due importance and value to his universe, Nature, God's divine laws.. his very own life is put in danger.. hence his death! A brilliant Monoku dear Demetrios as always. A FAV. Be blessed.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/13/2018 5:48:00 PM
God, our Lord, has made it clear to Man what He expects from him. If however Man disregards HIS establishment then he knows what is coming! The blame is on Man! Thank you so very much for your profound and well written comment dear, Besma. Bless you!
Date: 8/13/2018 2:23:00 AM
- One must be totally blind, if one does not see what is happening with the nature - Great written, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/13/2018 5:44:00 PM
Yes, I agree dearest, Anne-Lise but if we look around us people seem to pretend to be blind ! Thank you very much for your gracious comment! Hugs xxx
Date: 8/12/2018 10:25:00 PM
Spoken with wisdom and truth my friend.. destruction is rampant and only serves to bring us, and all other living things, closer to the edge.. a brilliant monoku, dear Demetrios. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/13/2018 5:43:00 PM
So good to see you dear, Susan! Thank you very much for such a beautiful comment!
Date: 8/12/2018 9:44:00 AM
Ah men to that! ;) xomo!
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Date: 8/12/2018 2:38:00 PM
As you know, it wracks my brain as well, breaks my heart. Most often I'm embarrassed to be human. ;) xomo
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Date: 8/12/2018 1:31:00 PM
Dearest Maureen. Amen! Unfortunately, people do not care that much about the environment. Probably they do not think that we really are in danger. One day though they will understand but it will be too late! Thank you so much for caring!
Date: 8/12/2018 4:05:00 AM
Mans stupidity will certainly bring about the destruction of our beautiful world. Tom
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Date: 8/12/2018 7:10:00 AM
Yes, Man's stupidity is infinite ( Einstein) dear, Tom! Each day destroys part of our beautiful world! Thank you very much!

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