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The Delightful Dances of Nature

her feathery dress she lifted and danced in style until flew away Won first place in Strict Haiku Poetry Contest sponsored by William Kekaula

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Rashi Soni

Date: 4/2/2020 8:08:00 AM

Lovely poem. Congrats on your win. Rashi

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/2/2020 9:55:00 AM

Thank you for your time dear poet..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/4/2020 3:42:00 PM

Did a double take, as first I thought the bird's dress had flown away! Smiles, Jenish! :) gw

Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/4/2020 10:39:00 PM

Yes.. I thought the same.. It can be a Haiku or a Senryu...lol..

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/3/2020 8:52:00 PM

Cool and interesting write!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/3/2020 9:11:00 PM

Thank you Kim..

Eve Roper

Date: 2/2/2020 9:49:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Jenish. Hugs Eve

Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/2/2020 10:38:00 PM

Thank you Eve..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/2/2020 12:35:00 PM

- Congratulations on your wonderful haiku, Jenish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/2/2020 12:46:00 PM

Thank you Anne..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/2/2020 9:28:00 AM

So cute! Congrats on the win

Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/2/2020 10:05:00 AM

Thank you Andrea..

Peter W Iversen

Date: 2/2/2020 7:55:00 AM

Very ,very nice,congrats-Peter

Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/2/2020 9:26:00 AM

Thank you Peter..

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/2/2020 5:34:00 AM

Mesmerizing Haiku dearest, Jenish! Hugs xxx

Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/2/2020 6:41:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios for your kind words..

Ann Gilmour

Date: 2/2/2020 12:43:00 AM

this is the sweetest Haiku Jenish, I loved it and congrats to you on your top place win. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/2/2020 12:45:00 AM

Thank you Ann for your sweet comments..

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/1/2020 11:26:00 PM

Congratulations Jenish, I could just picture the scene. Love this form of poetry, never heard of it until I joined soup and amazed that three lines could say so much like you've done here. Tom

Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/2/2020 12:44:00 AM

Same here also... Haiku I never heard.. Now learning it from here.. Thank you for your support..

Sandra Adams

Date: 2/1/2020 6:24:00 PM

Beautifully penned Jenish :) hugs

Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/1/2020 9:19:00 PM

Thank you Sandra..

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/1/2020 10:52:00 AM

Very nice and freeing . Well done :)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/1/2020 11:30:00 AM

Thank you Heidi..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/1/2020 9:26:00 AM

I see her lifting to fly away--imagery well captured, Jenish.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/1/2020 9:29:00 AM

Thank you Vijay..