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The Delightful Dances of Nature

her feathery dress
she lifted and danced in style
until flew away


Won first place in Strict Haiku Poetry Contest sponsored by William Kekaula

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Rashi Soni

April 2, 2020 at 8:08 AM

Lovely poem. Congrats on your win. Rashi

Jenish Somadas

April 2, 2020 at 9:55 AM

Thank you for your time dear poet..

Gershon Wolf

February 4, 2020 at 3:42 PM

Did a double take, as first I thought the bird's dress had flown away! Smiles, Jenish! :) gw

Jenish Somadas

February 4, 2020 at 10:39 PM

Yes.. I thought the same.. It can be a Haiku or a Senryu...lol..

Kim Rodrigues

February 3, 2020 at 8:52 PM

Cool and interesting write!

Jenish Somadas

February 3, 2020 at 9:11 PM

Thank you Kim..

Eve Roper

February 2, 2020 at 9:49 PM

Congratulations on your win, Jenish. Hugs Eve

Jenish Somadas

February 2, 2020 at 10:38 PM

Thank you Eve..

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 2, 2020 at 12:35 PM

- Congratulations on your wonderful haiku, Jenish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenish Somadas

February 2, 2020 at 12:46 PM

Thank you Anne..

Andrea Dietrich

February 2, 2020 at 9:28 AM

So cute! Congrats on the win

Jenish Somadas

February 2, 2020 at 10:05 AM

Thank you Andrea..

Peter W Iversen

February 2, 2020 at 7:55 AM

Very ,very nice,congrats-Peter

Jenish Somadas

February 2, 2020 at 9:26 AM

Thank you Peter..

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 2, 2020 at 5:34 AM

Mesmerizing Haiku dearest, Jenish! Hugs xxx

Jenish Somadas

February 2, 2020 at 6:41 AM

Thank you Demetrios for your kind words..

Ann Gilmour

February 2, 2020 at 12:43 AM

this is the sweetest Haiku Jenish, I loved it and congrats to you on your top place win. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jenish Somadas

February 2, 2020 at 12:45 AM

Thank you Ann for your sweet comments..

Tom Cunningham

February 1, 2020 at 11:26 PM

Congratulations Jenish, I could just picture the scene. Love this form of poetry, never heard of it until I joined soup and amazed that three lines could say so much like you've done here. Tom

Jenish Somadas

February 2, 2020 at 12:44 AM

Same here also... Haiku I never heard.. Now learning it from here.. Thank you for your support..