The Delicacy

The fields have been swept clean
Round hay bales decorate the corners
Dry straw looking grass going dormant
Hawks search hoping for field mouse delicacy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chappell Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 2:12 AM
love this peace thank you duncan
Maverick Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 7:09 AM
sorry i got it wrong about suggestion, that was from someone else,
Maverick Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 7:04 AM
just read this poem, like it a lot, have entered emprisemed as you suggested,
A   Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 3:20 PM
Nice the world is food for all , enjoyed your poem, Sara! Hope them mice hide good,..p.d.
A  Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 9:31 AM
GOOD IMAGERY ON THIS, A WONDERFUL POEM TO READ SARAH! HAVE A BLESSED DAY*luv~SKAT
Bowie Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 6:24 AM
very visual ,great title thx 4 the comment btw ~Jesse~
Dietrich Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 4:26 PM
I really like this one, Sara, It's so descriptive of an empty field in the fall. Luv, Andrea
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September 26, 2010 at 2:25 PM
Great images of the fall season, Sara. Enjoyed your poem very much. Love, Carolyn
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September 25, 2010 at 5:21 PM
Very visual picture Sara... a great prelude to getting the Halloween Season in high gear... bales of hay and hayrides abound in my part of town..luv... hope everyone is fine... been dealing with a pulled muscle in my back.. pain ...but .. prayers helped so much... and rest...too..luv..
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