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The Delicacy

The fields have been swept clean Round hay bales decorate the corners Dry straw looking grass going dormant Hawks search hoping for field mouse delicacy

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Duncan Chappell

Date: 10/29/2010 2:12:00 AM

love this peace thank you duncan

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/1/2010 7:09:00 AM

sorry i got it wrong about suggestion, that was from someone else,

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/1/2010 7:04:00 AM

just read this poem, like it a lot, have entered emprisemed as you suggested,

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/27/2010 3:20:00 PM

Nice the world is food for all , enjoyed your poem, Sara! Hope them mice hide good,..p.d.

Skat A

Date: 9/27/2010 9:31:00 AM

GOOD IMAGERY ON THIS, A WONDERFUL POEM TO READ SARAH! HAVE A BLESSED DAY*luv~SKAT

Jessica Bowie

Date: 9/27/2010 6:24:00 AM

very visual ,great title thx 4 the comment btw ~Jesse~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/26/2010 4:26:00 PM

I really like this one, Sara, It's so descriptive of an empty field in the fall. Luv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/26/2010 2:25:00 PM

Great images of the fall season, Sara. Enjoyed your poem very much. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/25/2010 5:21:00 PM

Very visual picture Sara... a great prelude to getting the Halloween Season in high gear... bales of hay and hayrides abound in my part of town..luv... hope everyone is fine... been dealing with a pulled muscle in my back.. pain ...but .. prayers helped so much... and rest...too..luv..