The Deity of Days Destroyed

She destroys my day
In such a beautiful way
Its hard to be angry
She destroys my day
In such a beautiful way
Simply by being
There were i lay
Opening my eyes
To such a sumptous sight
Means its
All downhill
From here
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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January 30, 2012 at 8:49 AM
Thank you for sharing a part of yourself with us in your poetry Shaggy. Love, Carol
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January 29, 2012 at 3:38 PM
This poem tells the story so well of how someone can destroy your day but you are loving it anyway.
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January 29, 2012 at 2:16 PM
sad story in this poem....but nicely done. -oxox love Anne-Lise
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