The Defeat of Shan Yu

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The guards patrolled the Chinese wall
As they did every day
They did not pay much attention
Seems to be the usual way

A clink disturbs ones peaceful stroll
A three armed hook appears
Catches on the parapet
With one of its ears

The guards are so outnumbered
There is just one thing to do
Set alight the warning fires
For the coming of Shan Yu

In the Palace of the Emperor
Panic reigns supreme
The calm tones of the Emperor
Voice of reason it would seem

Send messengers out far and wide
Conscript or volunteer
Take one from each family
Then bring them all back here

One old decorated hero
Zhou from the clan of Fa
He was one could hardly walk
For sure below his par

His daughter Mulan took him home
She has another Fa in mind
Her father asks no questions
He is sure she's being kind

She goes alone into her room
Her tresses start to fall
She continues cutting til
There's not much left at all

Then dressing up in rough male clothes
The palace to attend
I am the volunteer from Fa
The only one they send

Mulan is not a boy's name
That will have to change
Ping is one she thinks of
From a quite restricted range

Li Shang leads them into battle
Takes them head on to the fray
Against the army of the Hun
That has got bigger every day

The small defending army
Uses rockets for long range
The advancing Hun just pours along
With very little change

Now Ping espies a mountain
With quite an overhang
She sends a rocket to explode
Start a landslide with the bang

Buries the attacking Hun
It seems the job is done
Then the worst thing happens as
They climb out one by one

First the horde attacks the Palace
Takes the Emperor in hand
Kill him and his leaders
Then spread throughout the land

There is only one can stop them
It is the girl Mulan
She needs to kill the great Shan Yu
In any way she can

She faces him with threat of sword
But just when she seems beat
A friend that has been helping her
Sends fireworks and heat

And so Mulan she saves the day
Everyone bows down
The Emperor gives her Shan Yu's sword
And his own medal of renown

She takes them to her father
After shock he feels at peace
The worry and frustration
He was buried in can cease

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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