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The Death of You

Wrote this back in middle school, sitting at the piano. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Save me I’m drowning, Six feet below Helplessly falling, Into the darkness we know All the life begins to drain, Wrists are painted red with shame Die from what I’m dreaming of, From the death of my love Standing by your stone, Whispers bleed through Standing here alone, Thinking of you All the life begins to drain, Wrists are painted red with shame Die from what I’m dreaming of, From the death of my love Take my life and take my hand! Please! Just try and understand All that I am going through, From the death of you…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/19/2011 10:44:00 PM
Dear Laura, Superb Write, I feel YOUR Pain I Lost The LOVE of my Life My Wife on Our Everlasting Day; Our Wedding Day YOU must feel when YOUR "Standin here alone Thinking of YOU" that YOU are never Alone YOUR LOVE's LOVE will Always be in YOUR Heart I feel a bond with YOU After Reading this Masterpiece Soup Mail Reply LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege... Harry I am Tired and am going to bed See YOU tomorrow LOVE YOU...Harry
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Date: 7/2/2011 7:32:00 PM
Wow, this is impressive...even without knowing you were so young when writing it. I loved, "Wrists are painted read with shame." In middle school, I was sent to the counselor for writing like this =) I enjoy reading your poetry, and thanks for commenting on mine!
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