The Death of Me

Loving you will the death of me,
I knew from the start,
What loving you would do to me,
I knew what the consequences were,
But I still took the risk,
Our love is now like a broken disk,
Can't you see what you're doing to me?
Can't you see that you're killing me?
This cannot continue to be,
This is not how I wanna be,
I cannot take much more of this,
I love you but you're killing me,
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Xia Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 12:50 PM
I love this poem, I wrote a few poems like this too. Except from the opposite perspective
Bowrin Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 1:05 PM
thanks
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