The Death of Me

the death of me is but a whistle in the air
the whistle near but far 
it is unpredictable 
life as we know 
does not really show
for the death of me is near 
I hate it
I love it
im all above it
hating life is untrue
for you would not read this 
you have a life don't lose it
you have a body don't bruise it 
you have a family don't hurt it
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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July 9, 2014 at 12:26 AM
Dylan, Congratulation, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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June 18, 2014 at 11:54 AM
This is very deep Dylan,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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June 18, 2014 at 7:28 AM
W~elcome to poetrysoup. E~mblem of the best poetry website which gives you; l~ove that comes from richness of her words, c~ourage to harden your faith against writer's block, o~rientation toward being the best bard, m~emories about famous poems and poets. E~mbrace this lovely website KENNEDY T~his is a caring community o~f all pleasant poems and prettiest poets. P~oet is a bard known for his o~rderly composition of words to e~ncourage love and peace, t~ransparent truth and reality, r~hymes of time and beauty of nature, y~ellowjournalism and comedy. S~oup is what we dissolve our food with. O~ne who dissolve his life in poetry soup will be u~pgraded.Please KENNEDY cook for the world; "p~oetrysoup"
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June 18, 2014 at 4:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Dylan :) - I choose your first very well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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June 17, 2014 at 12:09 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Dylan. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. Enjoy!
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June 17, 2014 at 7:57 AM
Dylan,, love life, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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June 17, 2014 at 6:58 AM
Hello Dylan, Welcome to Poetry Soup, you have joined a family of great thinkers who will speak to your heart, encourage you and enjoy your talent I will definitely be among those who will not stop to read your work Hope this journey will lead you to your goal As for your first poem, I love it … welcome to the sweet side of the world Your new PS friend .… R. Roger. C
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