The Deal

Running in the dark I tripped and fell
Copper in the air, all I could smell
Fear and terror touched my head
Hope I wasn't just left for dead

Up ahead was some kind of light
Saw some movement prepared to fight
Thats when I saw the look in his eye
Had to be strong or I knew I would die

He said follow me I know the way
If you want to live you'll do what I say
That's when I saw the horns and the tail
I knew right then I could be only in hell

I turned and ran as fast as I could
My body felt rigid, almost like wood
I could feel heat on the back of my neck
A blow to my head and I hit the deck

As blackness pulled me down in a hole
I knew that my life wasn't all that he stole
As hideous laughter brought me awake
I knew it was over, my soul he would take

What do you want was all I could say
He said with a smirk," You may want to pray "
My mind snapped and I began to squeal
The last thing I heard was " Let's make a deal "

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/7/2016 11:29:00 PM
A classic last line! :-)
Login to Reply
Williams Avatar
Scott Williams
Date: 10/9/2016 10:02:00 PM
Thanks Tom. I really appreciate your feedback.
Date: 10/15/2015 9:34:00 PM
Ha, I like the ending twist. Love SKAT
Login to Reply
Williams Avatar
Scott Williams
Date: 10/22/2015 6:16:00 AM
Thanks so much. Its one of my personal favorites.
A  Avatar
Skat A
Date: 10/15/2015 9:34:00 PM
Congrats
Date: 10/14/2015 7:39:00 PM
Congrats on your fine win! Devil made you do it and surely guided your pen... A7
Login to Reply
Williams Avatar
Scott Williams
Date: 10/15/2015 11:53:00 AM
Thank you so much Robert. Really glad you liked it.
Date: 10/14/2015 5:29:00 PM
dark and twisted scott love the ending congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Williams Avatar
Scott Williams
Date: 10/15/2015 11:51:00 AM
Thanks a lot Jan. I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 10/14/2015 7:42:00 AM
Very well written, Scott. Great last line.
Login to Reply
Williams Avatar
Scott Williams
Date: 10/15/2015 11:50:00 AM
Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was fun to write.
Date: 10/13/2015 10:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. That doggone devil, always causing problems
Login to Reply
Williams Avatar
Scott Williams
Date: 10/14/2015 3:31:00 AM
That pesky devil is a menace. Thanks.
Date: 10/13/2015 10:34:00 PM
Congrats on ur super awesome top place winning write Scott!
Login to Reply
Williams Avatar
Scott Williams
Date: 10/14/2015 3:29:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Thats very kind of you.
Date: 10/13/2015 9:46:00 PM
LOL, love the dark & twisted scenario' thank you. Nate
Login to Reply
Williams Avatar
Scott Williams
Date: 10/13/2015 11:19:00 PM
Thanks for giving me an opportunity to showcase my dark and twisted side. It seems to be what I do best. This was a lot of fun.
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad