The Deadly Seven

The deadly seven






Although engulfed in sea's stormy stride,
even the killer tides failed to eat false pride,

Living entirely in self, want and greed,
creating divide in name of colour, caste and creed,

Kindness, sincerity and love that were must,
through entire life we were wrapped up in lust,

No help came as ship dwindled for an anchor,
Despair floated as we sank in our own anger, 

As if born to live forever, nurtured gluttony,
Ate up resources and nature's harmony,

Sparked the green eyed monster in malignity,
Friends surpassing, blazing embers of envy,

Not working hard as the worthy, lying in sloth,
Losing effervescence and expecting froth,

Only if a man could shun the deadly seven,
will open the golden gates to serene heaven.




Written Jan 30th, 2016
For contest by John lawless

Contest judged- Feb 25th, 2016
Awarded N/A

Now entered for "Second chance 2" poetry contest by Eve
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kendrick Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 2:53 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
Smith Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 5:48 AM
Love that you have described the effect these seven have on us and our surroundings.. Masterfully written dear friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
Callus Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 2:29 PM
You describe these sins well, Upma, and while we read we cannot but stop to ponder on how they effect us....are we guilty...are we innocent... hmmm ~ All the best. // paul
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 4:11 PM
Brilliantly penned gem. A win.
Nunez Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 4:31 AM
A very eloquent reminder, Dr. Upma. All the best. Hope you're keeping well.
Petersen Potter Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 10:13 AM
Excellent pen Dr.Upma! Beautifully painted piece dear friend.A 7!Wishing you a lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)Hugs! D.
Pinet Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 3:44 PM
Your vice is added to the countless others that hear your words and see a world in pain. Your mind set flows onto the page and we can relate with you and where your words lead us. Emile.
Haight Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 1:17 PM
Nicely done, Dr. Upma. All the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Muzzey Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 11:13 AM
A wonderful write, Upma. I enjoyed the read, best to you in the contest~ Caryl
Beaufort Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 6:23 PM
Well have you done. A lot there to reflect upon. I have to decide how I can better myself and what to tackle first!!!
Lamoureux Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 7:50 AM
I really like how you did this one Upma. I expect it will do well.
O'Leary Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 6:09 AM
A fine representation of temptation! Good luck in the contest!!
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