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My goodness the time's really flying by Nine o'clock and yet no new poems Get your bum into gear my dear friend Jack Morning will soon be broken Try not getting caught with your pants down Scouts say, “Always Be Prepared” It's very good strategy for many things in life Like toilet paper, always have a spare Maybe writing poetry is a little bit different It comes from deep down in our soul If the brain ain't clicking there's not much use Really difficult to really control Feeling some movement, hope it's not a doodoo Think it might be a few rhyming lines By jove, I do believe a poem is emerging So everything is gonna turn out fine Needn't have worried, it's happened before Last minute poems are the best Damn problem is they usually don't rhyme Means I really do fail the test

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Date: 8/15/2023 5:10:00 PM
...your writing from the souls humor prevents you writing dead lines.....stan
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/17/2023 4:37:00 AM
LOL Nothing but happy stuff from this old geezer!
Date: 8/14/2023 2:50:00 PM
Hello Happy Jack, no, you did not fail the test. This poem turned out to be okay. You created a poem. Love, /Darlene\
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/15/2023 4:09:00 AM
Hello Happy Jack, Good morning. You are welcome. Love, /Darlene\
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/14/2023 4:30:00 PM
Thank you dear friend! Much appreciated! XOX
Date: 8/14/2023 2:47:00 PM
is that an artificial hip you're shooting from? and as for the pants ...just don't drop 'em in y'er tracks.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/14/2023 4:27:00 PM
As always... at 88 of course it's artificial! LOL!
Date: 8/14/2023 12:26:00 PM
…hope its not a doodoo or a don’t! However this poem was definitely doable! This problem happens when I’m attempting limericks…not doodoo nor droppin the pants…lol…have a great day, sweet Happy!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/14/2023 1:06:00 PM
Hmmm dropping the pants!!! LOL Yeehaw! Kimmie, you're making me blush! Fun... love Happy Jack! XOX
Date: 8/14/2023 11:50:00 AM
Your shooting from the hip Jack, best way. Tom
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/14/2023 1:10:00 PM
Are we back on track again... ONLY if you agree! Cheers my long time friend!

Book: Shattered Sighs