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The Day I Will Never Forget

You're so sweet,When I saw you We have to meet,My love grew You're on mind,I really care You're just so kind,Love is so rare I want to share,You're mine But now I'm aware,You're so divine I saw you from afar,Why do you ? My heart is a scar,Is it too late? The you give,You make me want to chase I want to relive,When I see your face We may have to lie,It hurts me awfully I want to cry,I have to see I saw a light from above,I need you badly You're such a beautiful dove,You have to have me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/8/2008 3:03:00 PM
no. im not upset. but just so you know if your trying to text me it wont work sorry. i droped my phone in water :( so now it wont work. iot sucks i love this poem like all your other ones!
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Date: 10/8/2008 1:22:00 PM
thank you for commenting on my poems. this format looks kinda familiar... this is really good. kinda reminds me of my work. keep writing these kind of poems. your actually pretty good. Steven
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