The Day I Will Never Forget

You're so sweet,When I saw you
We have to meet,My love grew
You're on mind,I really care
You're just so kind,Love is so rare
I want to share,You're mine
But now I'm aware,You're so divine
I saw you from afar,Why do you     ?
My heart is a scar,Is it too late?
The you give,You make me want to chase
I want to relive,When I see your face
We may have to lie,It hurts me awfully
I want to cry,I have to see
I saw a light from above,I need you badly
You're such a beautiful dove,You have to have me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Watts Avatar
October 8, 2008 at 3:03 PM
no. im not upset. but just so you know if your trying to text me it wont work sorry. i droped my phone in water :( so now it wont work. iot sucks i love this poem like all your other ones!
Mcmorrow Avatar
October 8, 2008 at 1:22 PM
thank you for commenting on my poems. this format looks kinda familiar... this is really good. kinda reminds me of my work. keep writing these kind of poems. your actually pretty good. Steven
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