The Day I Met You

The day I met you as a friend, 
I knew my sorrows would end. 
We walked and laughed together...
That day I knew our friendship was forever.

For better or worse,
You’re always there.
In sickness and health my pains you bear.
I’m so glad I met someone like you
I never thought my dream would come true!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Durrani Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 12:58 PM
Reneice.....Congratulations to you on your win.
Mowatt Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 4:12 PM
Thank you Saleem.
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January 18, 2012 at 3:33 AM
Congratulations on your win :)
Mowatt Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 4:12 PM
Thanks Sarah.
Brown Avatar
January 17, 2012 at 7:25 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Reneice. Love, Carol P.S. you can find the featured poets down the center of PoetrySoup Homepage. There are 4 pages of them this week and you can click and read and leave comments to the other poets. The poems are changed around each day giving your poem more exposure. The poems are up from Sunday to the next Sunday
Mowatt Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 4:13 PM
Thanks you very much Carol.
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January 16, 2012 at 11:25 AM
CONGRATULATIONS ON THE WEEK`S WINNER! :) - oxox love Anne-Lise
Mowatt Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 6:19 PM
I won?? thanks!!!!
Prabhu Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 8:08 AM
well done.. very emotionally captured words...
Mowatt Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 6:19 PM
thank you sashi...
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December 18, 2011 at 10:45 AM
Welcome to the Soup. I shall continue to follow your poetry which I have enjoyed today. Always Michael
Mowatt Avatar
December 18, 2011 at 1:28 PM
Thanks Michael, glad you enjoyed my poem. Hope to write more interesting ones as time progresses...
Brown Avatar
December 12, 2011 at 5:27 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Reneice. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
Mowatt Avatar
December 18, 2011 at 1:26 PM
Thank you Carol, for you inspiration and your faith in me. Wishing you love and blessings also.
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