Carma Sanderson Poet Rhyme

The Day I Found You

The Day I Found You

The day I found you is the day my life became real, you complete me, where our hearts empaled it's every midnights vale of glow, that shines your soul, leading to mine,
Your exquisite eye, gleams in twinkled star, that fills the sky, as you look at me, with a ginle, smile amongst your face, that lights the world, and our kisses now so warm, touching lips, smooths my pride, to hyperventilate, deeply in love, for you I am, forever ADDICTED....

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Dan Kearley January 22, 2013 at 9:25 PM Oh,addicted to love....Just let it shine. :o) Carma Sanderson February 8, 2013 at 10:33 PM Most certainly am, will shine bright all smiles Dan :):)

Harry Horsman January 21, 2013 at 7:14 AM wow what an addiction Carma, this is so inspiring...just love it... Carma Sanderson January 21, 2013 at 8:30 PM Hi Harry Thank You, the addiction is all mine, lol glad you love it!!! All my love Carma

Debbie Duncan January 20, 2013 at 1:28 PM very nice write ;} Carma Sanderson January 21, 2013 at 8:28 PM Thank You Debbie

Anne-Lise Andresen January 20, 2013 at 7:25 AM - Good written Carma, sweet and lovely. - - Have a fine Sunday .... - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Carma Sanderson January 21, 2013 at 8:27 PM Thank You my sweet Anna-Lise same to you xoxo

Russell Sivey January 16, 2013 at 9:18 PM This is a tender and brilliant write. I loved the flow of the poem and it speaks of the heart from the heart! What a delightful piece, Great Work!! Carma Sanderson January 21, 2013 at 8:26 PM Thank You Russell, heart to heart