Notes About The Poem

The Day Flew

The bright illumination rose
Like a chandelier's light
Casting yellow through the dark pines
Adorning needles bright

A winter sunrise to remember
The Bluebirds in orange vest
Dancing next to Star Magnolia
Whose white blossoms are best

Nesting begins in earnest soon
The doves know when to coo
House Finches in dating color
Quiet nights for day flew  
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sands Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 5:18 PM
This is beautiful Sara! :)
Devonshire Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 3:22 PM
A very colorful description of day's dawn. Really like the comparison to the "chandelier's light" and the "orange vests" on Bluebirds. I think nesting is underway here. You will soon see the nests too! Hugs, Carolyn
Onclaud Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 8:10 AM
this is fascinating, sara, that i wonder if you are our second mother nature....love this!..huggs
Krampe Avatar
February 15, 2017 at 6:58 AM
You paint lovely images with your poem, Sara.
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