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The Day Flew

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The bright illumination rose Like a chandelier's light Casting yellow through the dark pines Adorning needles bright A winter sunrise to remember The Bluebirds in orange vest Dancing next to Star Magnolia Whose white blossoms are best Nesting begins in earnest soon The doves know when to coo House Finches in dating color Quiet nights for day flew

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Date: 3/3/2017 5:18:00 PM
This is beautiful Sara! :)
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Date: 2/17/2017 3:22:00 PM
A very colorful description of day's dawn. Really like the comparison to the "chandelier's light" and the "orange vests" on Bluebirds. I think nesting is underway here. You will soon see the nests too! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 2/15/2017 8:10:00 AM
this is fascinating, sara, that i wonder if you are our second mother nature....love this!..huggs
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Date: 2/15/2017 6:58:00 AM
You paint lovely images with your poem, Sara.
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