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The Day Before Christmas

lone twig stands upright
robins wag their tails to tweet
snow whitens the lea

1st Placement
Written 16/01/2022
Haiku 5,7,5 syllables
Winter Haiku contest
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Andrew John

February 3, 2022 at 2:13 AM

I love haikus, and this is a good one. Thanks.

Krish Radhakrishna

February 15, 2022 at 7:53 AM

Thanks John!:)

Andrea Dietrich

January 21, 2022 at 11:34 AM

back with congrats on a well deserved first placement

Krish Radhakrishna

January 21, 2022 at 1:12 PM

Thanks Andrea! Surprised but pleased with the result!:)

Joanna Daniel

January 20, 2022 at 5:51 AM

Excellent imagery, Krish, congratulations on top placement with this one:)

Krish Radhakrishna

January 20, 2022 at 6:39 AM

Thanks Jo! Delighted with your visit!:)

Connie Marcum Wong

January 18, 2022 at 6:08 PM

Congratulations on your super first placement Krish. Blessings xxoo

Krish Radhakrishna

January 18, 2022 at 6:34 PM

Thank you Connie!:). Much obliged!

Kim Merryman

January 18, 2022 at 12:05 PM

Great haiku, Krish! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Krish Radhakrishna

January 18, 2022 at 6:35 PM

Thanks Kim! My Kindest regards!:)

Paulette Calasibetta

January 18, 2022 at 5:14 AM

Congratulations on your win! Wonderful imagery! :) Paulette

Krish Radhakrishna

January 18, 2022 at 5:19 AM

Thanks Very Much Paulette! Pleased you like it!:)

Kim Rodrigues

January 17, 2022 at 11:59 AM

Very nice Krish! Congratulations!

Krish Radhakrishna

January 17, 2022 at 12:21 PM

Cheers Kim!:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 17, 2022 at 11:52 AM

- This was beautiful, Krish - Congratulations on your win in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Krish Radhakrishna

January 17, 2022 at 11:55 AM

Thanks Anne- Lise, Charmed, honoured!

Sam Kauffman

January 17, 2022 at 9:14 AM

Krish, such a serene picture that contrasts with the frenetic pace of the day before Christmas. Love the wagging feather tails of the robins! I can just see them! Congratulations. Sending you all the best for the new year and blessings.

Krish Radhakrishna

January 17, 2022 at 11:47 AM

Thank you Sam! Delighted to have your kind words!